Please your fans you must

Since you have requested Critique of your work, I shall try to supply you with some, from my personal point of view.

First thing I noticed in the picture, is some clash in perspective. The tiles behind the girl, indicates one set of perspective direction, but the bar for the shower curtain indicates another directon, and that confuses me visually. Now the bar for the shower curtain could be in an odd angle to the shower room, but that is not what you normally would expect. I would expect it to run parallel to the backwall ( with the tiles ), and in that case, the angle of the bar for the shower curtains seems wrong in this picture.

The girl herself. Personally I find her too muscular. Have her musclemass decrease in volume, and I think she would look better, but that is my personal opion. But to quote a famous Dutch Architect ( Mies van der Rohe ): Less is more. It might apply here as well, but in the end, it all comes down to what your intention with the picture is. If you want a Schwarzenegger with breast in the shower, well by all mens, go for it.

However, there are some disproportions in her musclemass displayed. Her underarm is too big, compared to the upper arm. Again, if you look at Schwarzenegger in his welltrained days, you will notice, that his underarms, while still muscular, they are not as big as his upperarm. And then there is that area at the elbow. There it looks like the backmuscle is in front of the underarm, and that confuses me again ( visually ).

Her adominal muscles looks a little wrong with the dark contour lines around them. Maybe if they were toned down, it would look more natural. On the plus side, I like her face, breast and hand.

Regarding Yoda, I would have thought that his neck and body would be more massive. Especially the neck gives me some trouble believing in. It does not look like it can support that head, that is on top of it. I like his pose, though.

Overall I like the setup and composition in this picture, and the idea in it. It is the technical aspects, that I am having a little problem with. Hope this is not to tough to read. It can sometimes be hard to recieve Critique for something, that you really like and have put at lot of effort into doing.

With kind regards
Kviesgaard